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Comments from Ghostrider939
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-05-10 00:07:43 | The Nerd - Part 3 | I am LOVING this story. Keep it going. I'd like to see Morgan suggest that her mum and Sara move in also . . . .Ohh Boy the possibilities . . .9/10 and + vote |
| 2011-05-10 01:11:58 | My first Time_(57) | Don't you monkeys get the idea. 12 years old is STATUTORY RAPE. He can go to jail for a long long time. Has the school system collapsed so much that you have no idea of the simplest of English grammar. For instance I as in me is always a capital I. Simple really. My favourite saying is If you can't write right - DON'T write!! based on the saying Anything worth doing, is worth doing right. I can only assume you want to treat us, the readers, as idiots, and any crap will do....SORRY. . . if you submit sub-standard work it WILL be criticised. |
| 2011-05-10 01:22:13 | Office Story | At the top you asked if I would read more of your stories . . . NO THANK YOU Reasons : paragraphing (none) spelling, punctuation, words missing and generally I don't like first person talking to me because I am not your female lover . . . .just a cranky old fart who would like you to take a bit more care in your writing THEN I think you could be very good - just not yet. |
| 2011-05-10 01:40:30 | DAMN, DAMN. . .I was really looking forward to trashing this story, having just finished reading some crap, BUT I can't. Beautifully written. A really good read. More PLEASE. . . .+ vote and 8.5/10 (trail wound into the forest - not winded and "my pussy muscles squeezing my hard dick" threw my concentration) | |
| 2011-05-10 01:53:49 | Southern Comfort - 2 | Looking forward to Part Three |