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Comments from Ghostrider939
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-06-02 17:09:59 | Really funny, zany little story and I loved it . . .and my positive vote should show that. 8/10 | |
| 2012-06-02 21:58:54 | Coping with Retirement, part 5 - Sibling Rivalry | Jesus, Some people worry about the stupidest things. Thanks Mr S Bloody great story and I've followed all the well written, well spaced chapters with growing fascination. . .Well Done. +ve vote and my personal 8/10 |
| 2012-06-02 22:00:34 | Coping with Retirement, part 5 - Sibling Rivalry | Jesus, Some people worry about the stupidest things. Thanks Mr S Bloody great story and I've followed all the well written, well spaced chapters with growing fascination. . .Well Done. +ve vote and my personal 8/10 (PS Seems none of the other monkeys are prepared to sign in preferring anonymous slagging) |
| 2012-06-03 16:59:47 | Stacy's Awakening | Could be a good story. I don't know. Saw the solid block of text and consigned this to the "I can't be bothered to read this if they can't be bothered using paragraphs". |
| 2012-06-03 20:07:24 | Tiffany birthday | Sorry, I gave up... shocking spelling, no idea of punctuation or spacing and my fantasy is that anyone will be able to read the story without just junking it in despair. If this is the best you can do as a writer, I suggest a job at the Golden Arches or Kentucky Fucked Duck. I don't vote negatively for poor writing but this time I was tempted |