| 2012-06-12 22:35:38 |
Babysitting_(0)
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I thought this was great when the author can't even spell aching in his own nom de plume, and then doesn't even understand the basics of the English language. BUT, even better was the number of fuckwits who don't understand the word FANTASY |
| 2012-06-14 18:13:26 |
Sexy Snow White and the Hot Hunter
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One exception to a perfectly written story. The word below. Bellow is a loud yell and spoilt my concentration. Please MORE - I love this nonsense. + ve vote and personal 8/10 |
| 2012-06-14 18:38:02 |
Little Red Riding Hood_(5)
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Plenty of scope to continue this one. Wolfie catches Red again and Daddy jumps in just after Wolfie finishes screwing Red and gives her some of his log, after tying up the wolf. Granny could decide to fuck the wolf into submission. Mummy could join in a threesome with Daddy and Red - and they could ALL live happily ever after. |
| 2012-06-15 00:36:16 |
My virgin cousin
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Gave up on the first line. If a writer is not prepared to follow simple laws of writing and properly space out their work, I'm not prepared to waste my time and get a headache trying to read it. Paragraphs are there for a reason - to break down a solid chunk of text into readable bites. No vote !! |
| 2012-06-16 03:02:53 |
Fucking Daddy ch. 3
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Fantastic little three part fantasy, beautifully written. Positive vote and personal grading 9/10. I get a lot of humour reading about all the fuckwits that think pregnancy is necessary . . . .NOPE. |