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Comments from Ghostrider939
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-06-04 20:42:11 | Same mistake | Yup, Ah figured any clown who liked a 454 Chevelle would have trouble with English. Great story let down by, well not much actually. Sometimes not capitalising the pronoun I as in me. Positive vote and personal score 7/10 |
| 2012-06-04 20:51:15 | Married with Children_(1) | I'm 60 and I'm still waiting for my "jids to come home from school". Should put your age up top because if this is an example of your writing, they'll think your about twelve, AND a liar. True story ... my hairy arse. |
| 2012-06-07 01:32:38 | Slave Market | Absolute Crap : Spacing . . . the pronoun I is always a CAPITAL LETTER and u is not a word - you is a word. . . . .you are an illiterate. Please stop writing until you get at least a primary school education. |
| 2012-06-07 01:35:31 | Medieval Torture | Crap, crap crap . . .I know eight year olds who can write better stories with more skill than this. Take up hairdressing - your writing sucks. |
| 2012-06-07 18:48:21 | Daddy's secret girlfriend 1 (completed) | Ohh Sammie, I TRIED to hate your story, not the subject ; I love that, but the really bad spelling, erratic layout and poor grammar. BUT . . . in the end I just flat loved it. Realistic (mostly) and therefore possibly a true story. Please keep writing. I'll look forward to seeing if you develop into a really good writer. |