sexstories.com
Comments from Ghostrider939
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-06-23 18:23:30 | Confessions of a Wayward Gynecologist- Pt1 | Agree with previous critics. Beautifully written erotic story. Well Done and Positive vote. (Why can't some of the other contributors to this site take as much pride/care with their work.) 8/10 |
| 2012-06-24 17:14:30 | My Own Lolita | Not bad for a first attempt AceAes, but, as with most newbies, spacing makes the story easier to read. Break the story down into bite sized chunks by double spacing your paragraphs. Otherwise, very good and positive vote. (7.5/10) |
| 2012-06-25 22:53:28 | Damian’s Harem part 2 | DS, I REALLY wanted to give you a positive vote and tell you what a great writer you are, BUT I would be lying. The story isn't bad but is totally spoiled by shocking/terrible/childish spelling. You really need to find someone who has some competence in the English language to proof read your writing before you submit it. |
| 2012-06-29 17:24:13 | Another ELP masterpiece, thought provoking - to someone with a brain, and beautifully written/ spaced. 9.5/10 and Positive Vote | |
| 2012-07-06 21:14:03 | Great story PP, and realistic. Yes I know - I was brought up in Halswell in Christchurch and currently live out near Lincoln University, so I am aware of those places in Dorkland. Still, respect to you - you can't help the fact you were born a sub standard North Islander LOL. Positive vote and personal grading 8.5/10 |