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Comments from Fix'm
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-05-07 09:22:45 | Incentious Family | Of course this is a re-post as Msr.Shakespeare is quite incapable of writing his own material and prefers to steal the work of others whenever he thinks he can get away with it. Of the 3 stories he posted before this one all except the first (which given the poor writing, juvenile content, and style was likely written by him) were stolen by him from far better writers and posted without giving the original author credit for their work. It's a damned shame that neither the moderators or the Admin people on this site will call him on this because someone who steals the intellectual property of another are the lowest of all the santorum sucking trolls that infest this board!!! Fix'm |
| 2011-05-10 01:12:38 | Office Story | your story shows potential, however, your constant shifting of verb tenses is extremely distracting and makes reading difficult and annoying. The same can be said of your spelling and spacing. I would suggest a creative writing class at your local community college as a starting point. - THX Fix'm |
| 2011-05-10 01:33:22 | The Nerd - Part 3 | Yar! What the Ghostrider said. - THX Fix'm |
| 2011-05-11 01:53:02 | The Therapy I Needed | I don't just like redheads I bloody well adore them and have ever since a certain 12 yo cousin kissed me more than 50+ years ago ;~} |
| 2011-05-11 04:36:35 | Will you please post the next part - NOW!!! - THX Fix'm |