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Comments from Fix'm
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-05-14 23:14:09 | Millenium Bartender III | I am sure that your stories are quite good however I refuse to read them because you seem to know nothing about the use of paragraphs. I am certain that someone has to have mentioned this to you before because it is a very obvious flaw yet I have seen no real improvement from your first story to this your most current this is why I gave your story a negative vote. |
| 2011-05-16 01:24:23 | Big Brother Bodyguard ch2 | same crap as before. alrite is not a fucking word - comprende? Story has become a bit unrealistic, the spelling and grammar still suck and it appears you didn't listen to a damned thing that was said after the 1st in this series 1/10 Fix'm |
| 2011-05-16 01:45:01 | The Nerd -Epilog | Good series - Excellent Twist!!! THX Fix'm |
| 2011-05-16 03:05:25 | The Therapy I Needed | Simple solution - If you don't like it don't read it!!! Fix'm |
| 2011-05-17 08:06:37 | Great story, but way too short - quit being a tease and make then about 3x longer! |