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Comments from Fix'm
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-05-11 05:52:29 | Holly Chapter 2 | I realize that this is a work of fiction, however, I find the story to be somewhat less than plausible and lacking in realism. I have read better. Fix'm |
| 2011-05-11 05:58:08 | Holly Chapter 1 | I don't like the forcible rape of a minor and when the guy refused to pull out before cuming that is what the consensual sex became. 2/10 Fix'm |
| 2011-05-11 06:04:38 | Club Inflictions...Part 1 | You really need to work on your spacing. The 2 lines/space/2 lines is very disconcerting and makes reading and following the plot very difficult. Fix'm |
| 2011-05-11 06:08:12 | family visit reaveals cousin as a slut | Good story and plot although you could be way more descriptive. Keep at it and you'll do fine. - THX Fix'm |
| 2011-05-11 20:43:18 | My friends mom | Won't say it's the worst I have read on this site, but it's damned close to it. Lose 99% of the caps and start over. Fix'm |