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Comments from Fix'm
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-05-07 03:11:29 | Body Of A Man, Mind Of A Machine 3: The Mental Precipice | Outstanding!!! By all means please continue. - THX Fix'm |
| 2011-05-07 03:22:13 | The Tri[ of a Lifetime | Don' t listen to the critics - proceed at your own pace and become more descriptive as you go. You really need to proofread what you have written and use a spellchecker. Other than that a good story. - THX Fix'm |
| 2011-05-07 04:11:56 | Donald: Chapert One | Ghostrider939 is absolutely correct this is a childish story. What it appears is that you will not accept anything that is critical of your writing and consider it to be hateful - what an immature and juvenile attitude. This may be a work of fiction, but it is totally unrealistic! I don't know if you are conversant with the laws of NYC or NY State or the US for that matter, but it appears that you are not. A 16 yo girl is still considered a minor as 18 is the age of consent and a teacher would be brought up on charges and fired for letting a minor leave school with an non-relative adult. The character "Donald" would himself be arrested for contributing to the delinquency of a minor and perhaps pedophilia as well for posting the anal rape of a 5yo by her father regardless of the source since he is the owner of the website. Furthermore the website itself would have been shut down by the authorities for its content alone. Fix'm |
| 2011-05-07 05:03:40 | Donald: Chapert One | The post under the heading "Anonymous reader 2011-05-07 04:58:50" belong to me - for some reason this stupid system logged me out before I could post it under my name - THX Fix'm btw - what the fuck is going on with the double comment posts - this system has been screwed up since they fixed the hack earlier today |
| 2011-05-07 07:24:41 | When I Was a Kid Part VI | Simply an outstanding series with a nice pace, good spacing, and great character development. I am really looking forward to reading many more stories. - THX Fix'm |