| 2012-06-04 00:16:48 |
CAW#11 - Cold Winters Day (re-editted)II
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Well this story kind of have that cold eerie feeling to it. Well as a reader, I know this female, who is 5'7" and 103 pounds had to go through some kind of abuse in her past. But, I wasn't expecting her to do what she did to the guy and the other 4 victims who didn't knew about her past. The ending was so unexpected, but I kind of like it. I know that this is a CAW 11 entry, but I would love a continuation of this story, or a pre sequel to give the reader more insight into her past. (I hope that you're understanding what I"m saying.) |
| 2012-06-20 23:08:31 |
A Sexy Subject Part 2 A Lesson
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Yes sexynicole69, I definitely enjoyed reading part 2. I see that you have reveal some more background info in this one. Another excellent scene with Mr. Burkle and Trish. Two visits in one day and this is only the first day of tutoring......hmmm lol ...I wonder what other lessons Mr. Burkle have in store for Trish.? |
| 2012-08-28 01:23:23 |
Yukio's Adventures Part 5
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HI JadeM, you never seem to disappoint. I love part 5 of this series. I see the Yukio is still continuing with her adventures. I see that she had a warm welcome from some people at school with her welcome to Texas type of party. In part five, I like that she get to know a little about her neighbor a little, but at the same time, we are learn a little more about Yukio. The sex scene with Hillary and Tonya was a nice way to start the chapter. I wonder where would her next adventures would lead her to and what other experiences she had in her past? |
| 2012-08-28 02:01:19 |
ON ROYAL PALM ESATE Part One: Happenings between a man and a woman
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Erotical, I like how this story had started out so far. I love that Renee is forced to move to a new environment where she begins to learn about various things that were kept from her. meforyou couldn't have said it any better! I definitely am ready for a part two. |
| 2012-08-29 00:12:11 |
Mom Let Me Fuck You
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Erotical, this is a pretty decent dark fantasy type of story you have written here. I like that you were pretty descriptive in this one, especially about the characters. |