| 2012-11-04 20:47:14 |
Candy From Strangers 1 : Yardwork
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badbabysitter, I had enjoyed reading part 1 of Candy From Strangers. I feel that this is going to be a great series as well. |
| 2012-11-04 21:05:10 |
Candy From Strangers 2 : The View
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badbabysitter, I had enjoyed reading part 2 of Candy From Strangers as well. It is interesting to see what will happen next. |
| 2012-11-15 22:57:58 |
Charity At Work 3: Retail Therapy
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I enjoyed reading part 3 of Charity At Work. I felt that this chapter was well -paced and loved the action in this one. |
| 2012-11-15 23:09:54 |
Charity At Work 2 : Do Fries Come With That?
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Hi badbabysitter, even though I liked part 2, I felt that you rush through part 2 a little. It seem to be a little too short to me. I enjoy charity adventure at her second job, but it was too fast placed and ended too quickly. This is more of a filler type of chapter. |
| 2012-11-16 23:16:47 |
Charity At Work 4 : Learning the Hard Way
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I felt that part 4 was a great continuation to part 3. Yes I thought that part four was dark chapter as well, but I like that Charity has to deal with some bad moments in her life. This is the first time that I have seen some character growth for Charity through out the series, where she is learning some hard life lessons. Keep up the good work. |