| 2012-11-20 23:37:23 |
The Librarian and the Bartender
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Wow hornypixy, this is a wonderful romance story that you have written. There is so much imagery in this story. After reading this story, it seems more like a magical fairy tale, with how Brandon and Emily would end up meeting each other to ending up to being in a romantic relationship. I also love how you would write and tell readers what each character were thinking and feeling from their point of view. |
| 2012-12-02 23:02:56 |
The Librarian and the Bartender, Part two
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Hi Hornypixy, I'm had enjoyed reading part 2 of The Librarian and the Bartender as well as part 1. I felt that the narration in this part was unbelievable in the terms of capturing the details of the action in the bar. I liked how you drew out the fantasy from part 1 to reality in part 2. The sexual scene was hot as hell in this one, but I really like that Emily was referred as two different people in this one. |
| 2012-12-31 02:10:43 |
Marie's Christmas
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Redlust, I have enjoyed reading this story. It kind of remind me of the movie, Ant Bully, which the main character is magically shrunken down to the size of the ants. He had to help the ants out and would be turned back to normal size afterwards. |
| 2013-01-04 20:04:19 |
Charity Graduates 2 : Getting Even
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Hi badbabysitter, I like the way that you displayed the action in this chapter. I like that the trio had a clever plan to get back at the V.P. It was kind of funny how the trio got their payback and humiliated her. I can't believe how emotional the trio was at the end of the ordeal. |
| 2013-01-04 20:46:38 |
Charity Graduates 3 : Hope and Change
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This was a pretty interesting chapter! Charity plans to kill two birds with one stone with running for class president and get good looks on college applications. It was amusing to see how Charity and Angie work to get their votes. |