| 2012-10-11 22:34:36 |
Sister Catherine's Nighmare – CAW 13
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As a talented writer in my opinion, it seems that you had to dig down a bit to write such a wonderful, but yet disturbing tale. You definitely would have readers feel some strong emotions from reading this story. |
| 2012-10-12 23:30:20 |
The Cherry Shop
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Hi Dizzyworks673, I felt that you had written a nice decent, but chilling tale. I love how the tale was told about the cherry shop. The ritual part of the story seem kind of weird to me, because the way the girls were used in the ritual. I felt that this part of the story could have been done differently. Overall, this is an excellent story and I have enjoyed reading it. |
| 2012-10-19 23:51:41 |
Faith, Hope and Charity 4 : Hot For Teacher
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badbabysitter, part 4 was a great addition to the Faith, Hope, and Charity story. I figured that a chapter like this was coming sooner or later even through you had gave readers hints. I like that you were consistent with this part as the previous ones. The action was great and well as the details that went with it. I can't wait until you post a part 5! Well done! |
| 2012-10-27 20:08:26 |
Faith , Hope and Charity 5: Anal Detention
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Wow, what a way to end the school year! Sooner or later someone would've figure out what Faith, Hope, and Charity were doing around the school. I felt that this was a great chapter as well. I like how you found a clever way to humiliate the trio for what they have done during the school year. |
| 2012-11-04 20:05:37 |
Candy From Strangers : Prologue
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badbabysister, I like the insight from the prologue that you have written. Nice setting with a quite a history. I can't wait to read part one of Candy From Strangers. |