| 2013-03-05 18:38:51 |
My Love_(0)
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Well, I had enjoyed reading your first shared story on here. I like how the story flowed in the beginning, but I felt it was a little rushed toward to end. I like how you have written parts of the story from Clare and Dean points of view. I felt that the sex scene was decent, but it could had be more drawn out with more sexual foreplay. Anon reader did said some good key points about it. I would love for you to continue writing some more wonderful stories. |
| 2013-04-15 22:31:25 |
An Ebony Wife's first step to sluthood
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Hi Caramel, I had enjoyed reading this story. You're an intelligent beautiful woman with a wonderful talent for writing. I loved how you told the story at a moderate pace with vivid details, seducing the mind... forcing me to see through the eyes of the main character and feeling aroused from reading this! |
| 2013-06-01 00:51:40 |
My First College Hookup
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Hi unhgirl69, I had enjoyed reading this story. I just hated that it kind of ended so quickly, but it had instantly grabbed my attention from the beginning. Also I love the descriptive details in the story as well. |
| 2013-06-01 01:39:13 |
What Happens at a Frat House
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Hi unhgirl69, I felt that you had an excellent job writing and sharing this story. I can see that you had described some of your emotions in this one as well. |
| 2013-07-05 21:42:14 |
Am I normal part 1
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Hi Hearts & Roses, I enjoy reading this encounter told by your wife. I love reading and hearing about the anticipation that your wife has about what is going to happen to her in the hotel room. Thanks for posting this encounter told in her words and point of view! |