| 2012-09-29 23:04:36 |
Charity Starts At Home: Chapter 1 : Mother-Daughter Reunion
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Hi badbabysitter, I loved this introductory chapter of this story. I felt that it is well written and a great beginning for the later chapters to come. ( I know that you had already written them, but I'm going to read them when I get a chance.) |
| 2012-09-30 00:17:26 |
Charity Starts At Home : Chapter 2 : Entertaining Guests
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Hi badbabysitter, I loved how descriptive you was in this chapter with the action. I'm not big on grammar, so I won't say anything on that. This chapter was well written and thought out. I will have to read chapter 3 to find out what will happen next. |
| 2012-09-30 20:02:18 |
Faith, Hope and Charity : 3: Charity Breaks Down
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In this chapter, I see that Charity had to deal with some issues and pressure in being in a relationship with a person. This chapter also shows that many people like Charity sometime have to think about the other person and try to make a compromise, or decisions on what we do when they're in a relationship. In overall, I really enjoy reading this chapter as well. |
| 2012-09-30 20:15:01 |
Faith, Hope and Charity : 2: Smoking in the Boys Room
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I see that Faith, Hope, and Charity are getting to know the football team a little better. I like that this is a chapter that leads the reader to the point that Charity is finally gets into a relationship with a guy from school. Of course the action in the boys room was hot as well. |
| 2012-09-30 20:28:17 |
Faith, Hope and Charity :1: Beeder
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Yes, we finally get to see what happens at school. I like this introductory chapter that we, the readers, get introduced to new characters and school life. Overall, I felt that this is a well written chapter with some new beginnings and anticipation to come. |