2012-03-11 19:12:03 |
Monica's Birthday
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Another well written story. It is so descriptive, it is almost as if you are narrating the action as it's happening, as opposed to making it up as you are writing. It also reveals the attraction and passion you have for Monica. I would feel the same in my relation with my wife. Very erotic. Thanks again. |
2012-03-11 19:18:18 |
Sleeping Monica
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Ditto again. You must have proofread you work very well, or you are perfect in your typing, no obvious mistakes in spelling or grammer. Love your stories, even if it is not my personal taste. Your love and passion is as real as mine. No difference. More! |
2012-03-11 23:46:29 |
Fiance's Encounter With A Pony
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I think I and a hundred other men would love to live in this fantasy. THREE beautiful women and a ranch. WOW. I love your whole series of stories. Keep writing. |
2012-03-12 11:43:06 |
SEX AND TRAGEDY: My Story: Part 1
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Meforyou. That was a well written story. Different perspective than normal. I like the fact that finally the man gets caught and punished. More real life. You mixed the feelings of doubt and attraction very well. Very descriptive sex scenes. The fears of Tina are what many young girls experience, when involved in incest, and last a long time. You covered a lot of emotions in this story. Good job. |
2012-03-13 18:58:48 |
my sister: then & now
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Wow. Hot story. I could picture this as I read. My little sister is still gorgeous and she is now 62. Never sex, but I could still imagine her in a hot tub. Fantasies at least never quit. |