| 2012-04-02 19:43:17 |
My first gang bang
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When you finished, was it as good as you hoped? You sounded satisfied. Another good story about fantasies. You kept us reading. Any more? |
| 2012-04-04 00:14:43 |
Like a Good Neighbor_(0)
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I think I need to go over and borrow his paint sprayer too. Very hot story and very well presented. Good job. |
| 2012-04-04 08:49:38 |
A SOPHISTOCATED AND VERSATILE LADY
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That was another great story Douggie. I am wondering if for you, writing a sex scene with someone you actually know, is better than a fictitious partner. If your friend Me Pink Girlie is as pretty as you describe, I would love to see her photos too. Very erotic sex portrayals. It is also interesting to look for the difference in British and American terminology in wording used. Just by reading someones story you can usually tell where it originated. Nothing wrong with eithers linguistics. Any way after all the blah, blah, by me, I like this one too. |
| 2012-04-04 22:38:05 |
Rescue at sea
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To all the landlubbers that might need to know, just use channel 16 the emergency channel monitored by the Coast Guard. But with these two women don't bother. A week or two won't hurt. |
| 2012-04-07 14:49:37 |
Doomsday (Fixed and edited)
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Now this is my kind of story. I love to read about survival situations. You did a good job of selecting useful items. Including of course five beautiful women. Just a note. The MRE's will keep and would be better stored for later. Use up the perishables first. Nitpicky, I know for a story. But you did a fantastic job of writing it. Please continue with more chapters of this. It can be interesting, and sexy at the same time. Just a selfish note. Add another male, like a paramedic for example, to help with any emergency. |