| 2012-03-16 09:34:04 |
Dinner Date
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Not bad for your first story. I know the extra letter inserts are from a problem in posting. I just tried to read around them. Good story line of a man with two sexy females. Most mens fantasy. Maybe a little brief in some spots, and jumps off topic, but not much. Good start. Keep writing. |
| 2012-03-16 17:24:55 |
THE FIRST TIME COUPLE: Part 2
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You got it perfect this time. Good story with No spelling or grammer errors. Your descriptions of the couple having sex are very thorough, without being repetitive. Very sensual and romantic From my own experience, I seem to remember being very nervous and anxious the first time. Your characters are very relaxed and comfortable together. Many ways to go from here. Maybe a confrontation with the bully at the river, where the other girl joins in and attacks them, and James either has to watch, or defend his girl. Keep writing. Best work yet. |
| 2012-03-16 21:35:32 |
Friends with Benefits pt1
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Why is it that if a girl has sex with several guys, she is labeled a whore. But if a guy has multiple partners, he is a stud. Unfair labeling. At least they both have experience, like in this story. Great sex. The ex girl friend has nothing to say who he is with. She left him. Open game. |
| 2012-03-17 23:01:04 |
Math Tutor
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What, no other comments on a good story. In my college days I did flunk Algebra, twice. I needed a tutor like this and it might have been different. I did ace Geometry and Calculus. And in the rest of my life I never found a need for Algebra. Waste of time. I would sign up in a minute if I could get this tutor. Thanks for the treat. Good story. |
| 2012-03-17 23:32:15 |
A Chance Encounter?
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Why no comments on a good story. Very sensual and with the surprise ending a very good read. You really brought out the emotions and feelings of both women. The guilt with Beth, and the hurt with Katie. They say once a woman tries another woman, they might not go back. Oh, I hope not. |