| 2012-03-18 00:01:06 |
Verde County
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Great as a sex story. Glad it was fiction. Imagine the sexual harrassment and abuse of power suits. You are right, Most law enforcement officers would never act like this. Imagine it? Maybe. It did sound like a woman telling the story. With the embarrassment and shame. Nice job. Part two in Estes Park or Grand Junction with her friend. |
| 2012-03-18 12:31:19 |
Willie the Dog - the Full Story
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Oh my god blue I never laughed so hard reading a story. This was terrific. You almost think like a dog. This one should have been in the contest. Imagine if our dogs could tell us about our neighbors. Might make for many good storys. Please do more like this. Thanks for the laugh. |
| 2012-03-18 13:10:57 |
Mountain Rescue
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Very good story. I would love to live in the mountains like that again. I did when I was younger. But not with two hot women like that. I might still be there. Very easy to read, good layout, and enticing storyline. Thanks for this one. |
| 2012-03-20 15:15:13 |
CAW #9 - The Most Painful Gift
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I enjoyed the story knowing the characters were fictional, It was well written and easy to read. As in most stories, we don't have to get too deep into the emotional or psychological aspects of the characters. Just enough to lay a background on the storyline. Some couples stay together if only because of the investment in time and money of a business or lifestyle. Some because of an emotional need to belong and not be alone. Each reader can draw his own conclusions. Another good job. |
| 2012-03-20 15:43:30 |
WIfes birthday party at her salon
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Interesting story. Need to check your spelling a little better, but at least you presented it. Good job. |