| 2012-04-07 20:14:59 |
Grandpa's Journals: The Cowgirl's Confidence, Partr 3
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2stfauther. Thank you for the trilogy. it is as good as your others. You have a real talent for portraying a loving caring relationship between a grandfather and grandaughter. Whether it is in Florida, Oregon, or Alaska, or the Caribbean, it is done well. As a grandfather myself, I would not want to do this with my grandaughters. but as a male reading a fantasy, it is well done. Thanks |
| 2012-04-08 15:45:35 |
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Dan. You took on a subject that is sure to be controversial, but needs to be told. You are right that many people take religeous beliefs to the extreme. Acts done in "The name of God" are tolerated and accepted, when they should be banned and shameful. Well written story so far, Including the part where Father Dan is transfered, instead of punished for his acts. happens all the time. |
| 2012-04-08 16:08:34 |
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Dan You mixed the name in the second paragraph, but that was the only mistake I saw. You carried the theme on through this part well. I am actually getting angry reading this (fiction) because I know it happens. Parents give their young children to Ministers, or Priests to use and abuse as they see fit. Thanks for presenting a story we actually need to think about. Keep going. |
| 2012-04-08 16:32:05 |
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No preaching. Just a few mistakes, But very well done. Tough subject. It is hard to come up with anything good to say about such happenings other than you did a great job of storytelling. |
| 2012-04-08 16:41:57 |
Doomsday (Fixed and edited)
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Please be a southern gentleman and do part 2. I think you will have a big following. I am waiting. |