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Comments from belizelarry
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-03-26 11:10:44 | The Princess and the Blacksmith | Broadsword. I read it again. I have tried to think why this gets to me so much. You do have a few mistakes and some of the dialog is disjointed, but underlying all that is some of the wildest and craziest humor I have ever read. All the profound thinkers and experts will say it it "off the wall". But you know what? Shit sticks to the wall. This might be insane, but how does it compare to the supposed greatness of Chaucer's Canterbury Tales that bored the s..t out of me. As I said in my first post, this is either genius, or the most demented thing on this site. I am still laughing. How can someone read?...King: I bought you a cat. Princess: Auntie says I should play with my pussy. But this one is boring. or Princess: Why are all the poor people smiling? King: Because they don't have children. LOL LOL I am sorry, I can't type and laugh at the same time. |
| 2012-03-29 11:59:09 | Son Helps His Mother Cope | Actually that was a very well written story. No glaring errors and easy to read. I like the fact that it is a little different in content than other Mother/Son stories in that the son is a little older, not a virgen teen. Also that the mother is asleep and is not a deliberate attempt at incest. The son, willing, changes that a little, but a good story. thank you. |
| 2012-03-29 16:40:02 | Shane's Girl | That was cute and sweet. Quite a few errors. But the story was excellent. Even the nervousness came through. It is also nice to read about a guy who is caring enough, to not only use a condom, but care how the girl feels. Nice story. Just check your words a little more. Don't rush. Like sex, it is better done carefully and slow. Thanks for a nice one. |
| 2012-04-02 15:07:43 | Wyatt's island | Sorry. Even if this was an original story, the spelling and punctuation is so bad, it is hard to read. Try again and check your work. This was bad. |
| 2012-04-02 19:33:00 | The other man_(0) | It is nice to read about someones fantasies, and see them come true. I think we all would like to see ours come true too. But then what would we wish for or dream about? Maybe it is better this way, just reading about it and wishing we were there. Good story. Part two, John brings his wife next trip. |