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Comments from StoryTrollin
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-04-18 10:38:49 | The farm mare | I was bored by the time I finished "A trouble some boy..." Just exactly how many lobotomies have you had recently? How can you possibly think that your 'expertise' in writing is even decent enough to post on this site? The mangled garbage that is here is beyond even my capabilities to define, let alone define it three times. Now, assuming you're actually intelligent enough to breathe and eat, please refrain from posting anything else that might appear randomly in your brain (also assuming that it's there and intact). |
| 2013-04-18 10:40:05 | story #1_(1) | I finally decided to make an actual profile to do this with. Critiquing stories has never been so much fun! That was me, by the way. VVV |
| 2013-04-18 10:44:01 | car breakdown chapter 1 | Again with the vampires. Do any of you Twilight-obsessed tweens have anything better to write about? Originality goes a long way. Why in the hell would you subject the world to cruel and unusual punishment such as this? It's an absolute load of putrescent muck, useful only for toilet paper and not to be mistaken as anything that anyone anywhere at any time will be benefited by reading. |
| 2013-04-18 10:45:06 | Indian Crush/Foot Fetish | Damn site timed me out. Guess I'm having way too much fun with this. That was me, by the way. VVV |
| 2013-04-18 13:30:05 | the Tvar | How could any normal human being be entertained by a load of putrefied garbage? Just how demented are you, writing crap like this and thinking it's worth posting on this or any website? How many drugs did you need before this began taking root in your head? Ideas for a 'story' aside, just the composition is atrocious! Did you have to think for a week or just come up with this on the spot, trying desperately to fill the 5000 character requirement? Even my great grandparents with dementia could have still had the brain power to actually lay out the story in a worthwhile format. |