| 2020-08-01 02:10:38 |
What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4C
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White Walls- I truly appreciate the compliment. Thank you. |
| 2020-08-01 03:49:14 |
What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4C
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Next week will probably be pushing it as I'm trying my hand at short story now, but I will try to get it done quickly. |
| 2020-08-02 00:19:28 |
What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4C
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X-MAN215: Not going to happen. But thanks for the suggestion. |
| 2020-08-03 06:56:35 |
A Story of the Paper Vow
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Nicely done for a first story. There were some grammatical errors but with more practice you'll clean those up. My only critique is to try and not lump all the dialogue together. When bunched together it can get a little convoluted. Great job and keep writing. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| 2020-08-04 10:18:19 |
What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4C
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Proofreader- You are spot on with your comments. This will be explored further in Part 5. Thank you for reading. |