| 2020-09-19 22:29:39 |
The House on Montague Street
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Nicely written and well told story. Don't worry about how fast you get to the sex. Write at your own pace. This is not a sex story. It's a story that has sex in it. Bravo! |
| 2020-09-26 04:35:42 |
New Neighbors-pt.1
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What can I say? For a first story out the gate a very basic, generic run of the mill story this site is full of. The more you write the better you will get so keep writing. But overall this was not good at all. |
| 2020-09-27 10:11:44 |
The Sexy Story of Leanna (Part One)
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You have a very impressive writing style. You had me engaged throughout the story even with limited dialogue written. Look forward to future parts of this story. |
| 2020-09-28 10:02:04 |
Maria's Favor to a Geek - Chapter 1
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A very nice tale. Has a "Can't But Me Love" vibe to it. Interested on how you expand on this chapter. |
| 2020-09-28 10:27:00 |
Maria's Favor to a Geek - Chapter 2
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Nice follow-up and introduction of new characters. |