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Comments from throatHER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-12-12 10:03:58 | Mickey and Kat - Episode 2 | You bring your stories and characters to life because you are a talented writer but like I've told you on NUMEROUS occasions, making sequels are quite difficult. After the first part of this story there was no real need to make a second. I read the first, probably, quarter of the story then skinmed through the rest of it. I became disinterested. Writing is more than putting the correct punctuations and words in a sentence. You want the reader engaged and invested in the characters on a personal level in order for them to want to continue their story. I think you missed the mark on this one. This is a perfect example of the need of a different voting system because it doesn't deserve a negative vote but all positive votes are not created equal. |
| 2020-12-14 23:39:17 | Sheer Envy part 4 | Nicely written with a high level of believability. Looking forward to further chapters. |
| 2020-12-18 12:03:19 | Preacher’s Daughters Part 3 | Nicely written story but now the believability factor has decreased exponentially. The mom taking pictures of the father eating out the daughter? Turning into a typical incest story. |
| 2020-12-25 11:54:41 | Educating Cathy - Chapter 01 | A decent short story. |
| 2021-01-07 14:27:15 | A Bumpy Road | For some reason I am unable to vote because it pops up that there are too many votes for this story. Never seen that before. Anyhow, this is a tale as old as this site has been around with it being either mother and son, father and daughter, or your case brother and sister. Even with a recycled scenario it didn't detract from how well the story is written. I'm not sure if a part 2 is warranted but I can be wrong. |