| 2021-04-02 02:41:52 |
The Essay
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I enjoyed this tale. It had a high level of believability and it was well told. You had some minor grammatical errors. You would benefit from another pair of eyes to proofread your work as it's always hard for the writer to catch it themselves. Great job |
| 2021-05-20 01:19:21 |
Inviting the new neighbors to a BBQ
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This was a very nicely told story. Looking forward to what happens next. |
| 2021-05-20 03:00:19 |
Inviting the new neighbors to a BBQ - 2
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Another greatly written chapter. Had me engaged throughout. Bravo! |
| 2021-05-20 04:00:48 |
Inviting the new neighbors to a BBQ - 3
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Job well done. Keep up the good work! |
| 2021-05-21 11:43:34 |
Inviting the new neighbors to a BBQ - 4
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Another great chapter. I like where this story is heading. Keep up the good work. |