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Comments from throatHER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-08-16 08:36:32 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4C | Doing 1-2 pages Monday through Friday. Best estimation after edits and rewrites will be 2-weeks. |
| 2020-08-19 14:56:02 | Family Trip to Jamaica- Part 4 | Wasn't sure if the change in perspective would work but you proved me wrong. Nice chapter. Be careful with the typos |
| 2020-08-21 02:24:03 | Running Down a Dream | I voted positive for this tale but I forgot to sign in. This was very well written. I'm not sure if a part 2 is necessary because this story can stand on its on. But if you do plan to make this a series my suggestion is to look back at your previous works of Naked Day and Like a Good Neighbor. Chapter 1 of both series were fantastic but the subsequent sequels never lived up to the original. As an author myself I struggle with that; the main reason it takes me so long to put out sequels. You have a solid foundation for a great series. I am looking forward to to read the next chapter. You have a fan in me NCFan. |
| 2020-09-14 19:55:21 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4C | Sorry guys. But unfortunately will not be writing any longer. This is the end of WaDaSM. Can't put any more effort in a story that is being down voted intentionally every few days. Take care. |
| 2020-09-15 03:31:38 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4C | There was no clear vision of where I wanted to go. As I wrote I came up with ideas of what I wanted to explore. I knew for sure the themes of the upcoming installments. I would have explored Tanya's story arc by using the play Hamilton as a back drop of her story. I definitely was going to have a Ferris Bueller theme in a chapter dedicated to Nate. Danni would have had he comeuppance with a school scandal. Chad, Kimmie and Joe would have a major story line I had an idea for. But like I wrote it's way too much time and effort I try to put in these stories for it to be completed shit-on. Not sure if it's from other authors or their fans but I'm over it. I would just like to say thank you to all the fans of this series. I'm sincerely flattered that you guys enjoyed it as much as you did. Take Care |