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Comments from throatHER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-10-09 19:41:54 | Maria's Favor to a Geek - Chapter 10 | Sorry, I voted before I registered. Loved the ending. In my opinion, a side story for Steve and Sarah may become a bit tricky since we know what their ending is but it's not impossible. You may just run into problems of trying to keep it feeling brand new and interesting. I'm glad you were able to dust off this story and complete it. I know that feeling of just leaving a story undone. I find myself in that same situation. Look forward to your future work. |
| 2020-10-10 12:43:35 | Sins from my Stepmother, Book 1 (Ch 1-3) | Overall, a good start. The sexual tension between Teddy and his stepmother is evident. My only critique would be that this story really doesn't stand out from the multitude of other "incest" stories on this site. Push harder in your storytelling because you do have talent. |
| 2020-11-03 14:09:39 | Ready for More | A little over the top for my taste but not a bad tale. The sex had a kind of PabloDiablo feel to it like in his Chauffeur series. I'm not sure if you are considering extending this into a series but, like I've told you before, make it interesting. I'm not sure where else you can take this besides having the kids get involved but that loses steam rather quickly. |
| 2020-12-02 13:39:28 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 5 | Thank you guys and I really appreciate all the kind words. This story means a great deal to me. I couldn't give it up. I'm not sure how long it will go on, but I do know I'm still greatly inspired to keep writing. Part 6 is in the works currently and I'm super excited for you guys to read it. See you soon. |
| 2020-11-27 07:12:29 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4C | Part 5 completed. Hopefully it will be up by Tuesday or Wednesday. |