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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-08-02 12:54:52 | My brother Brandon and I | Good imagination, creativity & scenario. The only story line mistake I caught was: Kathy laid the dildos on the bed & walked out, then in Brandon's room she inserted one into herself (on the way to the bathroom). She should have carried one to the bathroom with her to use there. Good paragraphs, that's a mistake most "young" writers make. If any misspelled words or grammar errors, I didn't catch them. I'm looking forward to Ch 2. Thank you for sharing your talent with us (I tell all the authors that). Seems I've forgotten something, or had some statement that my computer deleted. Frequently I have to use "Ctl-Z" to recover what I've said. I always "proof" my comments & correct what I can before I post. |
| 2018-08-03 23:06:05 | An incest birthday chapter 4 | Looks like Mom slipped into Randy's room night before last; but I wouldn't be surprised if Lisa, Mom, Randy & Rita all end up in a foursome of some kind. Enjoyed Ur story line. If there were any tech issues, I missed them. Some of the paragraphs were a little long; especially when conversational dialogue is involved. Thank you for sharing Ur talent with us. |
| 2018-08-05 11:20:13 | The Wilson Family Saga (Part 1) | Unusual families. Seems the future will hold some unusual combinations of sexual intertwining. Black & white, threesomes & foursomes, photo sessions WOW ! ! Don't see how it could get any hotter! Lezies, DP, fucking, muff munching, ass eating & sucking, 69, girls & mix sex, also black & white mix. The only thing I left out was She/males & males sucking. If this 1st part is an indication as to what is to cum, this is one down & dirty fuck up of an interacial orgy, hot, HOT, HOTTER, than anything else I've ever read!!! Of course depending on ones taste & sexual orentation and openmindness. GOOD WRITTING, WOW !!! AWESOME, too! |
| 2018-08-05 12:09:55 | The Wilson Family Saga (Part 2) | Not exactly what I expected, but still good! |
| 2018-08-05 14:14:44 | The Bradford Family Saga Part 2 | Too short & no action toward the end. |