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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-03-07 13:41:05 | My Mother the Porn Star | goiko, you should have caught the little detail that "Dad" was one of the 1st casulities of the Iraq "Desert Storm". "Ladies" like Vanessa Williams & Susan Summers never think about the future consequenses of needing money & a satifaction from questionable filming of such indescressions. Just because I can't spell doesn't mean I can't THINK. |
| 2019-03-18 19:38:47 | Virgin Exhibitionist | All Ur stories (that I've read) do not have full closure. There is an acceptable conclusion of the story, but it is also (to me) so "open ended" that a novel could be written around the characters, and experiences & personal & sexual interactions.for a long time. Do they take chances to continue the communal practice to watch be watched? Are more individuals added to the circle? Did any of the 6 marry each other? After marriage, do they keep in touch swapping & swinging? The continued expansion of Ur stories (to me) would maximize the unique talent that I see here. I've read other authors that don't have Ur quality but because of the way they continue to extend their stories, I would grade them with higher marks. |
| 2019-03-26 13:59:16 | Mistletoe and Holly | Love it' more later after pt 2 !! |
| 2019-03-26 13:59:30 | Mistletoe and Holly | Love it' more later after pt 2 !! |
| 2019-03-26 16:24:40 | Mistletoe and Holly - Second Part – The New Year's Party | Tastefully written !! I never had any sisters close to my age; but, several female cousins that if they had hinted toward sex, would have jumped on it. I'm not sure if separation or growing up together makes that much difference. If the attraction & chemistry is there, it will happen (unless morals, mores, or other outside obstacles prevent it). I would really like to see the expansion of the story --Kyle marries Jill & Stan marries Holly. Because of the special bond Kyle & Holly have (Twins & lovers) family times together are strained until Jill & Holly decide to spice things up swapping brothers (husbands). All the family becomes much closer on a king size bed enjoying each other swapping back & forth.from husband & wife to brothers & sisters & back again. Talk about a hot foursome. Prelude to that could be a twin threesome w/ Jill & discussion as to how to recruit Stan to the circle. Either Jill tries to seduce him or Holly could introduce some F/F action on internet porn. |