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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2019-03-28 15:07:13 | My Swinging Parents_(0) | This is the 2nd time I've red a similar story where as a result of such a swap, the wife only would fuck 8" or bigger dicks, bypassing her husbands 6-7" altogether; But the swap was his idea. Looks like Amy may have made a similar mistake. Excited to see how it all progresses, especially between Amy & Chris. Also interested if the son gets involved? Good flow. Feel what Amy & Chris were thinking & doing should be in part 1. Both are upset by the outcome of passion between Tony & Kelly, but how are they going to react to each other is important, too, as well as to their reaction to their spouses passion toward each other!! This was suppose to be a vacation fun experiment, Tony (to me) has gone too far to suggest anything else except,"Do U want to do this again?" The "I love you"& " U're better than my wife." is out of place at this stage of the relationship. Kelly is also wrong to agree. What about the children & the yrs put into the marriages that exist? FICTION!! |
| 2019-03-28 16:17:56 | My Swinging Parents PART 2 | Looks like Ted is going to be the overall WINNER in this vacation!! Appears Kelly enjoys the domination & roughness Tony applies to her, but she still loves & respects (somewhat) Chris as her husband. Her comment to Ted, "This will strengthen our marriage" & " U're my son, I love U & will do ANYTHING for U!" Even though she enjoys the thrill of a stimulating difference in Tony's style of sex, she clings to the stability of Chris & Ted. That is more realistic & that's what I like in these stories "believable realism with divergent spice" Another unanswered question, "Does Tony treat Amy like this when they share sexual time together.? Does she like being treated like a slut or sex object instead a loving & cared for wife, friend, & lifetime soul mate? Excited to see how U continue the story. I've not read ahead, but have noticed at least 6 chapters. Looks good to me depending!! |
| 2019-03-28 17:12:20 | My Swinging Parents Part 3_(2) | FICTION! This is good writing & pretty realistic by the reactions in comments. Dummy, The "bleach thing was a joke" & compliment that Amy needed, all considered. Thoughtful Ted; and it gets better. One of the reasons to swap sex partners, is to experience different techniques as to what might be better. Ted ask "If U lick assholes, I've got one that needs attention" Tony's immaturity overlooks the fact to respect of different techniques & personalities. He obviously doesn't cherish Amy's feelings. Amy would like a little gentleness in contrast to how Tony treats her. She has to like it or just out of fear stays with Tony "for the girls sake" but, -- How is he going to treat the girls as they mature? To get full meaning of my intentions & position, U should read all my comments at each chapter. Chris & Ted don't like the way Tony treats Kelly but she's responded without compliant. Chris gracefully & tactfully expressed his displeasure (to Amy's embarrassment). |
| 2019-03-28 17:53:06 | My Swinging Parents PART 4 | Yes, I,too, am eager to see how the story flows. If the couples keep swapping, why should Kelly give up her time with Tony. She could keep her marriage, son's relationship, & feel like a teen with Tony. The circumstances (now) do not demand a drastic change (if Tony would be mature about it). If he isn't that could ruin life or everyone else in the families. Ted has already expressed his stand on divorce. I'm sure the girls don't want to loose their Dad in such a way. I don't see Chris taking Amy, so, unless Ted can accept the future, everybody's life is ruined. Eventually, Kelly would tire of the consistent abuse; that would make Tony nastier & meaner. What then? Immature Tony (pervet) only considers his lustful dominance (unrealistic). It may be an exciting change for Kelly but not a lifetime endurance. Your writing is excellent or readers would not so "worked up" about it!! Congratulations!! |
| 2019-03-28 18:20:53 | My Swinging Parents PART 5 | Another tasteful & delicate addition to the story. Going more the direction of realistic sanity. As I said earlier, "Spicy realism" is the best way to hold a readers attention. Do the latter chapters get as many reads & likes as the 1st few? That is the status of a good writer.The comments U receive indicates Ur success. I hope that I'm not the only one impressed. |