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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2019-03-28 18:46:14 | My Swinging Parents PART 5 | I just had a fantastic solution & resolution to the Story. Just a little bit radical. A comment earlier that Amy should dump Tony for Ted. I like it. Only the ''Scumbag" Tony would be a looser. (In my opinion, what he deserves) Amy, Kelly, Ted & Chis could enjoy a variety of swapping, etc. & when the "twins" are old enough they could be educated to be introduced to a more naturally developed attitude toward sex, then they could make their own decision as to with whom & when & where to explore the sexual part of their life. Not being forced into BDSM by their Dom Dad & weak Mom. Could Ted & Chris be rough enough to keep Amy's interest in the relationship? After all she & Kelly both show those tendencies. I'm excited to see Ur progress of the story Fireman11. Ur doing great!! |
| 2019-03-28 19:19:30 | My Swinging Parents Part 6 | Again, good work. Technically, flow, story line, character development, syntax, grammar etc. All pleasing to me. I'm not sure Ur going the direction I commented earlier, but it looks much better (in my opinion). I'm surely appreciate Ur creativity & realistic approach. |
| 2019-03-28 20:28:23 | My Swinging Parents Part 6 | I'm disappointed U didn't get enough feedback to continue this series. I saw Ur comments in Ur post. I've not been able to post a photo verification, so my only communication is this "open comments to stories" (no PM) I know I;m not the only one, but it seems only two of Ur fans have taken a little more effort & time to tell U so. The "Swapping Parents"series is the only work I've read (SO FAR),but I', not finished. Hope U've read all my comments along with each chapter & hope they have been encouraging & helpful. I love Ur presentation; You've got talent. My desire is to enjoy more of it! |
| 2019-03-28 21:06:47 | Mom the Slut_(1) | The "Swapping Parents" is much improved. This is a good story line hat needs to be expanded. Paragraphs U've learned, especially conversational entries. Character & flow of story is greatly improved, too. If I didn't know, I might not realize the same author wrote both stories The potential was there & you've improved on Ur talent & creativity as well as technical issues, Character building, etc. Looking forward to reading more of Ur works. |
| 2019-03-29 03:59:24 | Like a Good Neighbor 3 | it's BAD for the author when votes can't be counted. I am really enjoying these "Helping Neighbor" stories, but I've run out of votes today. All of them are very well done. Anything that might be considered hard Core or Nasty is explained as part of the story, nothing weird or "out of place" . The fact that it's a love story showing the deeper meaning of love & sex expressing that love makes it beautiful. Congratulations on a "piece" well done. (2 pieces if U like). If Mike plays out like I expect, this is going to be GREAT without Exxon or Tony. State Farm has never been close to this neighborly!! |