| 2016-05-27 16:40:56 |
THE UNIT [Jimmy Benson Finale]
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TO Ghost: Thank You for the compliment. Means a lot to me. And the comment that you refer to is my reference to the fact that only the people that we work with through the years really know the worth of our contributions to a system's success. The people that we work with everyday know. Official assessments have some value but tend to glorify the wrong people too often. I believe that the real heroes in life are those who honorably and ably carry their load of responsibility everyday and make very little noise about it! |
| 2016-05-27 16:52:28 |
THE MANY LOVES OF JIMMY BENSON 1_(1)
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Anonymous reader 5-27: Thank you for your thoughts about it. The story is by nature, episodic. It is quite a long story in its original form and even so in my posting of major portions of it on this board. If I had done a very descriptive version, the length would have been unwieldy. And so much of the action is carried through the conversations portrayed, sort of like a stage drama. And it is true, the details sort of swirl along until they are tied together at the end. Many of the details are setups for Jimmy's growth as a person and leading towards his eventuality. I suggest that you sit back and enjoy the ride, I try to say much about the human condition and each person's growth in what I have written. Or it is just a sexy story. Take your choice. |
| 2016-05-28 02:10:57 |
"Daddy?" I Whispered_(1)
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About the assertions of plagiarism I can find no reference to as 'scouries' here on this site. This is a serious assertion, since this is a wonderful story well done. Unless this charge can be proven, the assertions should be removed. |
| 2016-05-28 02:27:56 |
Cheering up Mom_(0)
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Second time that this author has been accused of plagiarism. I can find no reference to an author of that name on this site. If this accusation is bogus, this accusation needs to be removed. |
| 2016-05-28 17:38:43 |
PROM SURPRISE [Beginning of Jimmy's Story]
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TO Anonymous reader 05-28: I am not a professional writer. Conversation based drama has its own enthusiasts, they tend to like plays that have the whole story carried in conversations. But, it is not for all tastes. There are ever so many other types of writing on this site, try sampling them. |