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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-08 03:20:59 | My downward spiral to a becoming a slut Chapter 15 – “I hope you get what you deserve!” | The DNA evidence should confirm who the rapist were to Liz. Is Scott going to get what he deserves for setting up the coach. Is Sara still stupid enough to "Stand by her Man"? Ur writing is still unique & captivating. Thank you, again ! |
| 2019-04-08 11:34:09 | My downward spiral to a becoming a slut Chapter 12 – Medical exam follow up | Obviously I found Ch 12 & some of my questions were answered. " Yeah" for Liz doing the right thing Now if I can find Ch 9&3 to fill in more blanks. As always, your story line & details are surperb. Some of Ur content is alarming to the sences of mean vs magical, but I also understand that U are making a point as to the meanness & lack of respect some individuals feel toward other individuals by the former's twisted desires & lust confused with "the act of love" As I said earlier, the story is about "Tori", but to me, Elizabeth (Liz) is the heroine. |
| 2019-04-08 12:26:49 | My downward spiral to a becoming a slut Chapter 15 – “I hope you get what you deserve!” | Now I can't find ch 16 & 17. Ch 18 will have too any holes in the background, it may not make sense at all. I was writing a comment to Ch 15 ( I think) & hit "Alt" or "Ctrl" key accidentally & lost the page along with my "remarkable" comments Ha, Ha. Finding Ch 12 was a big help in understanding ch 13, 14 & 15. Scott may not have assaulted Liz, but like the coach rape abuse Scott may not have assaulted Liz, but like the coach rape & assault & abuse of Tori,, Scott set it up. One "bad apple" can make a difference. Guess to continue, I must go on to ch 18, (Sigh) Oh well !! |
| 2019-04-08 13:58:53 | My downward spiral to a becoming a slut Chapter 19 – Big mistake and overwhelmed | Thank U for sharing the reality of some "incidents" in Ur stories. I found it hard to believe some of Ur descriptions unless U had had them or someone had shared the horrific details with U. The weaving of character development, actions, empathy, & erotica (good & bad) presents a most captivating novel Reading each chapter (wish I could find the missing ones), Ur talent & creativity is professional (in my opinion). Some published books that I've read in the past are beneath Ur quality, talent, & creativity. U have found Ur creative outlet that hopefully can grow into a lucrative career if U enjoy it enough. I look forward to more of "Downward Spiral Slut." Thank you for sharing... |
| 2019-04-08 14:48:37 | My downward spiral to becoming a slut Chapter 20 – Confession of the truth | All the other comments simply mirror my own thoughts. The most outstanding quality of Ur work is the captivating involvement Ur readers experience. Sex may have been the inviting "gotchu" but Ur style & quality is what keeps Ur readers coming back for more of "the rest of the story". Tori's confession to the group (did she know Liz was present?) is a turning point for her recovery toward stability overcoming guilt, forgiving herself & letting go of the hate toward Scott, Coach, & others who violated her rights as an individual. It should also teach her a lesson (& others that read this story) that one does not go against Urself just to be popular. U demonstrate the inner conflict one can experience (in Tori) when allowing such a compromise of "core values" in our DNA. (Like, how does a baby know to suck on a breast or bottle?) Some things are just by instinct (U just know). "This is wrong right here & now! We shouldn't compromise those feelings (instincts)...!! |