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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-22 22:21:44 | Teasing Dad, again. | As I said earlier, Ur interaction of POV from Katie to Dad is awesome. Other authors could learn from U. Also Ur descriptions are so vivid the reader is there as a participant, not just an observer. The vivid wording implies first hand experience. That is a compliment. Take it as such. One place I noticed Ur tense of verb seemed wrong but no big deal here, maybe in a more professional setting, a "No, No" The fact of "More to follow" is fantastic. Really looking forward as to how U develop the relationship with Ur dad & other friends that think DILF. !! Sounds like a sleepover, "slumberless" party to me. Will the girls want to see what's happening or hide? Ur proofreader should have caught the verb error. Still a great job. Thanks again...!! Dudley |
| 2019-04-23 03:13:27 | Sexcapades with my Girlfriend's Mother - 1 | Good descriptions. Liked the scenerio ( I don't spell very well either). Needs polish! Ur not a moron, just a little too sloppy..!! |
| 2019-04-23 03:49:31 | Family Values | Not much character development; just hot desriptions of action. Short & dull story line. Expected more from Kim & Jack. Especially after supper (or diner up north). Like to read more of Ur stuff. |
| 2019-04-23 04:09:11 | The Barnyard Whore | I kinda expected Helen to have Jason fuck her to give him some more traditional relief. Good technical presentation. Unique story. Not much character development. |
| 2019-04-24 00:21:54 | An Unexpected Threesome | Thank you for this delightful yet suspenseful story. By the title it was obvious another person was going to make the "party". A little surprised the wife joined into the threesome the way she did. Shows a very open attitude in many ways. Seems the Boss may have lost out all the way around. The only point of question is when U brushed Ur dick,& it startled U. Why? Did Jordan brush Ur cock or did U startle Urself? Loved the story. Plan to read more of Ur works..!! |