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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-08 16:14:43 | My downward spiral to becoming a slut Chapter 21 – Happy Birthday Scott | Several chapters ago I made the comment about "child porno" & smearing of character (making public something private & personal). To me this was a given & wondered why the Principal didn't do something about it. Now, can Liz find proof of Scott's part in the assault against her. Will Thomas reveal the plot against her? With everything else he has done to "the love of his life, Tori", I would be surprised if he didn't play a part in the assault against someone who displeased him... This is how Ur stories affect readers; they are involved in the emotions of the characters. Congratulations on a job well done.... |
| 2019-04-08 18:28:30 | My downward spiral to becoming a slut Chapter 22 – Finding happiness | I'm sorry they haven't yet found a completeness in male affection, but glad they found love. I was wrong about Sara & Liz talking about Scott; Liz knew 1st hand (surprise). Obviously, my observations about readers "getting into the story" are proven by the comments about this chapter & the continuation of the series. This proves the quality of Ur talent & creativity. There have been a few errors in Ur work that U or any other proof reader could correct . Thank you for Ur submissions. |
| 2019-04-19 13:43:06 | All in the Family 3 | Linda may have been shocked at first by the "public" exhibition of sexual activity, but it allowed fantasy of things she had "daydreamed" about. The idea of experiencing those fantasies simply overwhelmed any shock or surprise she might have had, to pursue the experience, excitement, & satisfaction of new & multiple sex partners of variety. Well written, I would like to see additional chapters (after dad gets home) & maybe a girly threesome for the guys to enjoy (us to). One chapter could be presented as "1st person Linda" describing the new pleasures she has exploring her sexuality with family members. (New, because new family partners & new because of the multi-partner experience],, (She fantisized about sucking more than one dick, implying she had not previously had multi-partners at the same time [like threesome or foursome) .. If she could invite her boyfriend over, she could play with & experience the use of 3 dicks at the same time. WOW!!!. |
| 2019-04-20 04:07:55 | All in the Family 2 | I'm going to read Ch 3 again & hope the series continues. Great work. Just a little shorter than I expected. |
| 2019-04-20 04:08:18 | All in the Family 2 | I'm going to read Ch 3 again & hope the series continues. Great work. Just a little shorter than I expected. |