| 2019-01-24 02:44:17 |
Potential Part 25
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This chapter is probably the best thus far. One of your gifts as a truly talented author is the way you so easily create interesting dialog or conversation between characters. Of course clicking on POSITIVE RATING for this chapter was a no brained. Before submitting my comment I took the time to review what others are saying about POTENTIAL and this chapter in particular. During the six or so weeks I have been reading from this site I know who the STARS or the really good authors. PABLO DIABLO is one, though I am unfamiliar with MATHEMATICIAN his comments were very articulate and positive. You must know YOU are also one of the STARS on this site and in my not so humble opinion the best I have read. Posting on this site takes time and effort. |
| 2019-01-24 02:50:30 |
Potential Part 25
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I think this is the longest chapter thus far. I took the time to revisit chapter 1 & 2. Both were relatively short chapters. I also wanted to check on the quality of your prose in the first chapters compared to 25. You have improved so drastically and dramatically it is almost like the author of this one is not the same person that wrote 1 & 2. |
| 2019-01-24 03:39:28 |
The Rocker Part 1_(9)
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I am only to the point where DW plays in the band and am so impressed I have to comment. You are good. I can’t wait to finish this chapter and read the rest. I found you because of your comments for POTENTIAL by BiStander who is very talented as well. Thanks for the entertainment. You took the time to develop the characters so well they come to life! |
| 2019-01-25 00:37:16 |
The Rocker Part 1_(9)
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In finishing chapter 1, I could not wait to give the story a positive rating. The story line is well plotted and moves quickly, easily capturing the interest of the reader. I also commend you for copyrighting the story. As a fellow author, though I do not post on this site because of censorship, I copyright all of my work regardless if I will post on one of the free sites. This site does attract some excellent authors and you are one of the very best! If I read a story I will never give a negative rating because regardless of the quality, someone worked hard in composing as well as getting posted here, which is not easy. I give few positive ratings, however when I do, it means the story and the author really deserves the good rating. Ã am excited about following the story to its conclusion. |
| 2019-01-25 03:23:48 |
The Rocker Part 2_(5)
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If this story was a full length novel you will have created a PAGE TURNER! You are nothing if not talented. No wonder you copyright your work. I aplaud you for doing so. Your compositions are so good others will steal them and post them on the pay sites if you were not protected under copyright law. Though I do not post to this site, nevertheless I copyright all my work, even the crap that will end up in the rubbish. Really well written. If I may suggest, you may want to get someone to proofread as I spotted small errors in spelling in this chapter. |