| 2019-01-15 01:11:03 |
Potential Part 18
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189,549 words is damn impressive! I just finished chapter 17 and still reading 18. You are so clever with your plot. You figured a way for Deana to pursuade Evan to have sex so she can prove to herself she is heterosexual! Absolute genius! Now that I finished chapter 18 I have to say you are very clever. Again I compliment you for your very well thought out story lines and the development of such in depth profound characters. Excellent work! |
| 2019-01-15 01:11:04 |
Potential Part 18
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189,549 words is damn impressive! I just finished chapter 17 and still reading 18. You are so clever with your plot. You figured a way for Deana to pursuade Evan to have sex so she can prove to herself she is heterosexual! Absolute genius! Now that I finished chapter 18 I have to say you are very clever. Again I compliment you for your very well thought out story lines and the development of such in depth profound characters. Excellent work! |
| 2019-01-15 02:16:10 |
The Visit-Part Two
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I admire how prolific a writer and so versatile. All your stories are so diverse. I am curious if any of the story themes are derived from personal experience. Thus far I believe I have read your stories in the order they were posted. I have commented on all thus far and have assigned all a positive rating because you are blessed with a wonderful talent and the stories deserve the recognition and the ratings. |
| 2019-01-15 03:07:16 |
Virgin Exhibitionist
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You certainly have a great vivid imagination. You insist this story is complete fiction. Humph, I wonder? Except for the number of orgasmâs and ejaculations the story is very believable and feasible. I can certainly remember incidents from my youth that could have spiraled to the extent as described in your story. |
| 2019-01-15 03:30:48 |
Potential Part 19
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Plausibllity, that is the best possible word describing this chapter. How do you continue to create characters that evolve as more and more complex with each chapter? Do not be pressured into writing more and faster. Proceed at the pace your creativity dictates. You are the most talented author on this site, if you’re being harassed it is because someone is jealous and insecure! |