| 2019-01-21 02:01:09 |
Potential Part 24
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It just does not get better than chapter 24! I also read your comments in being surprised anyone was still reading your stories. Some of us like me just discovered you six or seven weeks ago. I also noticed comments from other readers who did not enjoy reading about some of the acts the characters perform. There is not another writer on the site who provides us with such a diverse, profound, interesting, attractive cast of characters. Just like in real life do we approve of everything our friends do? Or there are some people we meet that we just don’t like. I have read chapters 1 through 24, and they are all wonderful. Never, never change a thing! |
| 2019-01-21 02:22:39 |
Potential Part 24
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BiStander, you have the most vivid and incredible imagination! Where and how do you dream up all these absolutely outrageous scenarios? What is so scary that in my experience they are all so damn plausible and could actually happen in real life. Trifecta? You have to be kidding me! How did you come up with that one? I am so envious of your talent! |
| 2019-01-22 02:47:04 |
Clara, part 1
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I began reading your series with The Beginning, which was very poorly written. Now I finish your sixth and must compliment you on how you have improved and evolved into a good writer. This story is the most plausible. Everything you describe in this story has the ring of actually happening. I know because everything excep the anal were experiences I participated in. The camp out segment could have been lifted from my diary. I am curious as to where all this is leading? |
| 2019-01-22 02:53:38 |
Grandfather Whores Me Out
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Hopefully your “grandfather” stories are fictional and not as advertised TRUE STORIES. Your next story Clare part 1, is very well written and I believe represents true life because I saw at did it all except for anal. When we were that age we did oral and fucked all the time, but NO ANAL! |
| 2019-01-24 02:28:53 |
The Heist_(0)
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This story is the fourteenth I have read of your stuff posted on this site. This one is also by far your very best so far. Not only does the story line flow quickly, it also holds the readers interests. Unlike the previous thirteen, this stories plot is the most plausible! The story line in this story is what I suggest you concentrate on. The grandpa and other molestation stories, though entertaining were not believable as true or based on real life, unless there was considerable embellishments. I gave you a positive rating with this story because you deserved it. Though I found the grandpa story line disgusting, I refrained from giving a rating because you have talent and I don’t want you to be discouraged. |