| 2019-02-14 01:12:57 |
The Chauffeur (#22) Tampa and Dallas
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Pablo, I am going to run out of deive words to praise your story. This chapter is almost perfect with just the right amount of sex story mixed with the right amount of drama. Very good read! |
| 2019-02-14 02:52:17 |
The Chauffeur (#23) The City of Angels
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Next time you post three chapters at once, please give us a little warning! Some of us had plans other than spending hours reading three chapters back to back. You have me hooked because I cannot imagine where you will take us next on this wild ride. David Greene and entourage lives in such a sumptuous residence, I think at the least you can invent a more suitable name. Commune is too low class. How about something like Perla del Oriente, Casa Verde, Mansión Del Prado? Naw, those names are too pretentious. Great read! |
| 2019-02-14 03:14:04 |
The Chauffeur (#24) The Weekend (part 1)
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Pablo, You old Pirate. How much longer are you going to drag this story out? I thought that maybe this chapter would end the saga. However I read in your comments there is a chapter 25 and you are working on 26! You leave your readers exhausted with the non stop action and sex play. Certainly you must be writing from personal experience because the swing parties are described exactly as they happen in real life. FYI, there are two kinds of whores bath. I think in the military they are the crotch, the arm pits and the shit hole. With prostitutes I believe it is the face, the crotch and the pits. You have me addicted. What’s next maestro? |
| 2019-02-14 03:16:55 |
The Chauffeur (#24) The Weekend (part 1)
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Pablo, You old Pirate. How much longer are you going to drag this story out? I thought that maybe this chapter would end the saga. However I read in your comments there is a chapter 25 and you are working on 26! You leave your readers exhausted with the non stop action and sex play. Certainly you must be writing from personal experience because the swing parties are described exactly as they happen in real life. FYI, there are two kinds of whores bath. I think in the military they are the crotch, the arm pits and the shit hole. With prostitutes I believe it is the face, the crotch and the pits. You have me addicted. What’s next maestro? |
| 2019-02-15 03:49:57 |
The Chauffeur (#25) The Weekend (part 2)
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Just when I thought the story line could not get ,ore involved and interesting, you again do your magic. Excellent sense of drama. You have everone on edge wanting to find out what happened to poor Bob! Not that it is important but I am Mexican and we do not have life in prison sentences. 40 years is about the maximum, we do not have the death penalty either. For a foreigner on drug smuggleing the sentence is ten to fifteen years. Fantastic writing! BRAVO! |