| 2019-02-08 00:04:24 |
Brother Sister Mother Neightbor Part 1
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The story line really moves fast. The sister and brother experimenting is very realistically described. My brother and I experimented however not with nipple pulling. That act is a stretch, depending upon the age when it took place. Maybe a little more story and less sex scene will provide a little suspense or drama to the plot. |
| 2019-02-08 00:06:06 |
Brother Sister Mother Neightbor Part 1
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The story line really moves fast. The sister and brother experimenting is very realistically described. My brother and I experimented however not with nipple pulling. That act is a stretch, depending upon the age when it took place. Maybe a little more story and less sex scene will provide a little suspense or drama to the plot. |
| 2019-02-08 00:56:58 |
The Chauffeur (#17) The Fab Five
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I don’t know anything about Trolls. Genuine readers like me give you a positive review every time. For me it is the 17th positive review. Thanks for arranging the plot so that Jill did not have to suffer the emotional trama of an abortion! |
| 2019-02-08 01:43:24 |
The Chauffeur (#18) John
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Pablo you have such a solid reputation with providing entertaining stories with addictive plots you do need to worry about the Trolls! I do have to comment on the 9 inch stilettos for a rock concert. I have cut you a lot of slack in allowing you to take liberal doses of literary license in describing the numerous orgasms your characters achieve, not sleeping, hardly working,being compensated for outrageous amounts of money, stock options no real company could afford to give, etc., etc., But I draw the line with the 9 inches , Totally non plausible, impossible! I am about her age, 5 ft 9 inches tall and 147 lbs. I can wear 5 inch stilettos if going to dinner or a event where little walking is required. 9 inch stilettos NEVER! |
| 2019-02-08 01:45:03 |
The Chauffeur (#18) John
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You do NOT need to concern yourself with Trolls! Sorry about the typo in the previous message. |