| 2019-02-02 03:05:17 |
The Online Erotica Writer's Guide to Etiquette
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I just added your name to my favorite authors list |
| 2019-02-02 03:07:54 |
The Online Erotica Writer's Guide to Etiquette
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I just added your name to my favorite authors list |
| 2019-02-03 01:12:57 |
The Chauffeur(#9)....VEGAS BABY!
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Pablo, you have every reason to be pleased with yourself. Though the characters must all be on super vitamins to have the energy to fuck so frequently, the plot is the engine that drives the story. We all wait with breathless anticipation for the next chapter. Thanks for such excellent entertainment and reading! |
| 2019-02-03 02:27:32 |
My Neighbor's Incest Part VI (revised)
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This chapter certainly deserved the positive review I gave it. In reading this chapter here as well as on Wolf Pub, I notice when Joe is fucking Jasmine, she calls him Jasón. Is this a typo or was Jasmine fantasizing about someone named Jason? Regardless, I know this story is one of your earliest works, it still represents excellent story telling. |
| 2019-02-03 03:10:42 |
Shouldn't That Scare me More?
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This story is as you mention a tuned up version of something you wrote years ago. The trademark of an excellent story teller is the writers ability to switch genres so easily. The plot in this story is so different from Neighbors incest or Potential, however is still a fun, entertaining and interesting story. |