| 2019-02-01 03:34:00 |
The Chauffeur(#6).....The Plan
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There are so many twists and turns in the plot of this story, the reader is as dizzy as Tina after her misfortune. Just when the reader thinks they have everything figured out you toss in something so unexpected, like Jill and David getting fired, married, the accident, etc. etc.. I love the suspense you so very carefully weave into the story line. |
| 2019-02-02 01:04:46 |
The Chauffeur(#7).....The Revolution, The Evolution
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I am curious on what merit or grounds AlexFondler gave this chapter a negative review? All the rest are positive. Pablo, you are a great story teller. My other comment is all the characters you have created are all SUPER HUMANS! No mortal has the stamina to engage in sexual activity as frequently as these in your story do. I like the sex but like the plot or storyline also. |
| 2019-02-02 02:38:43 |
The Chauffeur(#8).. Game On
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Well, I notice alexfondler give another negative review for this chapter. Everyone else including me gave a positive review because this series represents going d story telling talent! We are all still following the story because the plot has our attention and we want to see where Pablo takes his super human characters. For me Pablo is the STUART WOODS of sex stories. Google Stuart Woods for those who are not familiar with his most impressive body of work. If any criticism can be attached to this story, it is only that Pablo is over generous with the money his main characters earn as well as the positions they are offered without the corresponding professional credentials to merit the position. Pablo you are a great talent and we as readers are fortunate to have your fun stories to entertain us . |
| 2019-02-02 02:49:25 |
The Online Erotica Writer's Guide to Etiquette
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| 2019-02-02 02:50:19 |
The Online Erotica Writer's Guide to Etiquette
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I just added your name to my favorite authors list |