| 2019-01-16 03:26:25 |
Potential Part 20
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Well, you hit a home run with this chapter, you batted the hall completely out of the ballpark to use baseball terms. Reading chapter 20 is like riding a emotional roller coaster! You have done a superb job in creating complex and entertaining characters, now those characters are involved in very realistic and totally plausible drama. I enjoyed the very thoughtful comments your admirers shared with you after chapters 19 & 20. You need to get over your insecurities. Everyone who reads your stories knows you are the most talented author in this site. The others I have checked out are pathetic in comparison. They write sex stories. You compose a story, you write with flair and style. You compose DRAMA, |
| 2019-01-17 00:48:52 |
We Just Clicked
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I am surprised when I noticed this story has been read 74,580 times without a single comment. I thoroughly enjoyed the story, though I felt a little exhausted upon completing it because of all the nonstop action. I found the story and plot very plausible as I too have enjoyed the lifestyle as described in the story. The truth be told I think most people have enjoyed threesoms and moresomes! |
| 2019-01-17 01:19:56 |
An Obsession--or Two...Part 1
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I have said this before, you are a wonderful writer, but apparently you have not tasted piss after the donor has drank four beers. The piss is going to taste like beer, sweet and NOT salty! Good story as always. You are very prolific and are really churning out the work. |
| 2019-01-17 01:22:21 |
An Obsession--or Two...Part 1
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Another suggestion, if you are going to taste piss, never sample the first offering in the morning. Have donors drink a couple of liters of liquid, water, or juice, no coffee. |
| 2019-01-17 03:42:44 |
Potential Part 21
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While punching the POSITIVE RATING button I was reflecting back over the story. Not only chapter 21, that I just finished, but the entire series of chapters. I was also aware how much energy, love, passion and most of all, time you have invested to date. I am curious as to what you get out of what you are doing. I know what your gifts and hard work have done for me. You have created a alternative universe for your readers, populated with characters that to us hsve come alive. Evan, Gloria, Candy, etc., are now part of our every day lives. We have gotten to know them and now they are not characters in a story, they are our friends. We can identify with their daily lives. We are happy and sad with them. IF THAT IS NOT RAW TALENT THEN I DONT KNOW WHAT IT IS! |