| 2019-01-13 03:41:12 |
Pee Party
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A really well thought out plot. You kept it interesting by devising more and more interesting and different scenarios. One observation, as much beer and water the youngsters drank I guarantee the piss would under no circumstances taste salty. Speaking from some experience my bladder is usually totally purged after three pisses. For me this equals about two and a half liters of liquid. Beer is very yummy, however flavored sparkling water is good as well as fruit juice. Any of these make the piss taste very delicious. Sparkling wine or champagne is great for desert after playing and drinking piss for awhile. |
| 2019-01-12 02:27:16 |
Potential Part 16
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I just finished reading chapter 16. This is one of your more creative offerings to date. First you surprise us with a wonderful, fun, entertaining new character in the form of Style. The name alone is interesting and mysterious. She/He is fresh and there is so much you can do with this character. I read some of the comments regarding Style. Don’t pay the any attention. With the creative energy you have displayed so far, there is a lot you can do with Style. I enjoyed your segment at the track. Scenes like the track action add a new dimension to the already interesting tale. |
| 2018-12-14 21:55:09 |
Potential Part 5
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BiStander, you have an amazing talent. I only recently discovered your compositions. Thus far I have read My Neighbors Incest and am up to chapter 5 for Potential. What is so astonishing is the fact your story line mirrors my real life experiences with my sister, brother and nieces and nephews! I do not know if you write from real life experience, but what you have written so far here with Potential is from the diary of my real life! I did kiss my sister and brother as you describe. I am only on chapter 5 but my siblings did much more with each other than you describe so far. Your stories are well written, you are articulate, your sentence structure and punctuation is spot on. Good Job! Besos, Anganell Brigette. |
| 2018-12-16 14:24:46 |
Turning Point _(0)
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Thanks, I really enjoyed this series, especially because so many of the activities described I enjoyed or viewed within my own family. I am a 21 year old female and my brother is 5 years older and my sister is 15 years older. I am close to my brother and saw him perform the same tricks Robert enjoys in your story. He was tall and slender at the age of 19 and he had me take photos and some video of him pissing and ejaculating his ball crème into his mouth. He was flexible enough at the time to be able to get the head of his dick inside his mouth. He drank his own piss as well as mine and he certainly swallowed all of his dick sugar. He also enjoyed deep tongue fucking my shit hole while I used my Hitachi Magic Wand. Sometimes my older sister would join us, but we did not invite non family to participate. BESOS Anganell Brigette |
| 2018-12-20 01:15:24 |
Potential 9
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My friend you are truly gifted. I am in awe and only encourage you to keep writing. The sexual aspect of the story is titilating and interesting but what grabs the reader is the overall story line or plot. It is like a TV drama, I can’t wait for the next episode. BESOS. your friend. Anganell |