| 2019-01-18 02:06:07 |
Behind Her Blue Eyes_(1)
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I remember reading Slutty Virgins posted on 31 May 2018. With this story I have read ten of your stories, sequentially except for Obsessions I. You are anything if not very prolific!, nine stories in five months is rather remarkable, considering how difficult it is the get stories posted here. I am talking to some of the other writers on this site and it takes them from four to six weeks between stories. You become a better writer with each story. Thank you for sharing. |
| 2019-01-18 02:10:13 |
Behind Her Blue Eyes_(1)
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Sorry I was in error, you posted nine stories in four months! I am amazed and impressed. I too write, however have chosen a different venue to share my scribbling . I am still checking this site out and may decide to share some of my stories as well. Good Work! |
| 2019-01-18 03:13:27 |
Behind Her Blue Eyes Part 2
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How fun! Your deion of the action of a nice warm moist tongue buried an inch or more deep inside Tinaâs shit cave, plunging in and out and her vigorous clit masssge is spot on! That combo does it for me every time. I even assume the fetal position after orgasmic release because everything is so damn sensitive I canât stand to be touched for about ten minutes! GREAT DESCRIPTION! |
| 2019-01-18 03:37:27 |
A Taste of What's to Come
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I am new to this topic as a story. I don’t know if the rules here insist you tone it down and keep the deions tame? Having experienced a lot of shit hole play in real life, I think you did as good a job with the limitations the censors place on you. Do you compose from actual experience or from fantasy? |
| 2019-01-18 03:46:58 |
A Taste of What's to Come Part 2
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I suggest slow the story and enlarge and expand on the plot. Chapter 1 is more plausible than chapter 2. I share this advise because I am also a contributor on these sites, albeit hsv3 not posted here in XN yet. More importantly I have engaged in shit hole fun for a number of years and the deion in this story is a stretch. Thanks for sharing. |