| 2010-04-09 20:57:31 |
Passion_(2)
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Lot of questionable things in a historical setting...it was a fair story I suppose, the violence is fine but move on and use the same descriptions for your rape scenes. |
| 2010-04-20 22:41:20 |
Homecoming part 3 & 4
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The perspective is still screwy the premise is good one of these days when I have time I'll show you what I mean. |
| 2010-05-05 23:00:44 |
VAGINAFEST - Chapter 1
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Not too bad if I do say so myself...CJ |
| 2010-05-05 23:09:11 |
Angelina’s Seduction and Brad’s Naked Surrender
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Very nicely done I liked this one too! CJ |
| 2010-05-05 23:14:31 |
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I agree this is very nice short and sweet and yummy good stuff.. CJ |