| 2011-05-04 13:10:44 |
My step-sister Sara!
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Wrote you a PM doll check it ... |
| 2011-05-05 17:31:05 |
Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 1 – 6th Year Begins
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Yes could have done without all the underlining it made it terribly hard to read |
| 2011-05-13 13:40:19 |
Amy's Zoophilla
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needs work... spelling please... a little punctuation probably... english now your first language? good idea... just needs refining. |
| 2011-06-28 21:19:06 |
The Sexy Babysitter
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Read your work... after you have written it ... Please... that alone will help you I'm sure. |
| 2011-07-21 20:22:15 |
MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT PART 1 THE RIDE (revised)
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Next time round amigo space out your paragraphs... |